Uprising- Dystopian Short Story

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1810019-Uprising

Here is the link, I don’t really want to re-format the whole thing again.

It is a pretty dark story about a slave master and how he loses everything, my first attempt at a dystopian short story of this length.

I hope you enjoy, and tell me what you think!

Thanks

-GS33

this was cool, other peeps–chegout 'is story