Classic Liberal

Also I would try not to implicitly insult your English teacher if I was you. sincerely hope that this quote was found by my teacher typing "language quotes" into Google rather than in the pages of Tractatus Logico-Philosophicus, Ludwig's only philosophical book (and I use the world philosophical very liberally here.) or Dear God, was this philosophy going to dominate my English class as it dominated the beige wall in front of me? I hoped not.

My only critique would be that if you haven't read or Kant (which I imagine you haven't) then don't include him. Making comparisons between authors who you haven't read calls your credibility into question, which probably isn't something you want haha. Otherwise you certainly write better than I did in high school.